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[Rising Death]

Confuzlement!

To be honest with you, I didnt watch all of it. Wnat to know why? It made enough sense for it to matter that it didnt make any sense. You clearly thought out a stoyry to this, but you failed to tell that story.

The animation was good in places, especialy at the start where he onfolds that bit of papper, and the loading screen looked realy good. Overall, i just think that you have rushed this. Epscially, for example the fight with the big guy, he jsut kicks him straight out the window... what the hell is up with that one dood!

overall... rushed.

RatherRandomReality responds:

Well, I did my best to come up with a 6:30min long movie for 2 months. You are maybe right it's slightly rushed, but writing a review about a movie that you didn't even finish watching is... wrong.

[Stick VG]

Lame

That was terable, there was abslutly no meaning behind it, and the sound was terable, most of it didnt play properly and as for the arni lines... very lame.

Why cant people understand, stick animation dose not mean you can do it lame!!! please put some effort into these things.

Panzerknacker responds:

Ok, why don't YOU try and make this better then? And learn spelling and grammar while you're at it, because this review looks like it was written by a damn six year old...

[Joey Stick 2]

Do you know about fps?

you clearly didnt make that helicopter or those AKs, else the rest of you animation wouldnt of been so bad. When you have bits like that that look so good, makes the not so good bits looks a lot worse.

you might want to try raisng you FPS up to about 25 - 30, this means you can get a much more smoth look, though you wil have to use more frames to get the same amount of animation. and try using a smaller brush, then thicken out the stick figures where you need to, thus givnig a nice bit of flow to it, a higher FPS will help with that.

overall not that bad, but it was still just sensless stick man violence, which is just so good dam boring. I like GOOD stick work, so long as it has a nice script, or is just amazingly well made. keep it dude.

Toady1104 responds:

Sorry, this is my 1st submission and I'm inexperient. But really, I did the AK and the Helicopter. (Sorry I don't speak english very well...)

[DEAD BY DAWN]

Just stay alive?

What is it you need help with, code or animating. Im presuming you need help with codeing, but... your idea for a game seems to be fairly flawed.

The reasons games have levels, skill gaming is that it makes them intresting. just staying the same for a 4 hour attack on your mosue button, that dont make a great game. And if im not that much mistaken, your just trying to make a resident evil stlye game...

but as for thi actull submision, it looks realy cool. If you could of kept up that supense for a bit longer with some sort of script, you could of hada pretyy dam good film there.

iamkatieholmes responds:

First of all thanks for the compliments. watch it again now that i've fixed it.

this would be a true RPG style game. But ex pererince would come from learning the ways of the game. EX. "how fast do they walk?" "how well do i know the town" "what best stops a zombie, guns or fire?". Things you will learn through out the game that will help you as you go.

You'll basicly start out by picking a empoyment be it engineer or policeman or what not and that will determin what objects and skills you start with. then you will be able to loot and salvage items and combine items. this in no way will be a "run around and shoot game"

[Accidental Emporer Reel 2]

More I say!!! MORE!!!!

ZOMG dude.

I watchedc both of these now, and the rock like hell!!!

sure the lip suync is the worst ever, but it all part of that style you have gonig down. By the law of all things cool, you can from now on only work on this series. you are not allowed any form of socila life and can only work just enough to keep you alive and producing this amazing stuff!!!

you need some sort of web site just for this.

best ever!!

Kralex responds:

Well actually... http://www.accidentalemperor.com/