thecoshman's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[3d Doom Tribute Demo]

I can apreciat how hard that is!

how long did it take you to do that!

few things you need to work on, mainly see if you can get the code to be more efficant, so it runs a bit more smoother.

It my help if you dont you use bit map sprites, i think flash can run faster if you dont use them.

as for the controls, they seem fairly good, would be nive if you can use the mouse, but i know you cant keep the mosue in the flash can you, may be if you have the mosue for fine aiming. the up/dwon for forward backward, and the left right for strafe. maybe even the wasd keys.

[Cursor Game]

well made

This just gets boring way to fast.

Funkylikamonkey responds:

whatever

[Go (The board game)]

Needs AI

No more that can be said.

[Illusions extreme]

Well, they did work

Its true, the ilusions did work, I understand how the first one works, but it take a while to explain. though when i first tried it i did it wrong, held my mouse over the image, but I can see whe people say that there is colour there.

It would be coool though if you built this so that you can dynamicly load a picture with a given URL. Plus I didnt give you that high a score for graphics as all of those ilusions you took from othere places, your screen shots where of low quality and the look was a bit bland, but it dose not matter the much.

overall though this was a bit boring, just stuff to look at, would be better suited to jsut linking to the pictures in a forum post, but meh.

see if you can a huge collection and have a realy nice menu to navigate them, and maybe explain how they work.

ghatauray responds:

Hi, thanks for the review. I will try and implement the improvements you suggested - the one about loading your own picture i think is a great idea but would be very hard because the trick requires photoshop.
Also i'll try to improve the "bland look".
Thanks for the constructive criticism,
Dan

[A big tutorial v1.0c]

WOOT MUSIC!!!

God i love that song, great peice of work that is.

But as for the tut, well it was simple, but it will do great for a nub to learn some stuff. But they could do with being a bit more detailed, just a little you know. Can't hurt to put some pics in there can it?

zoglander responds:

the main reson was that i ran out of space, in the next one i'm going to make it bigger and put pictures and animations in there

[Submachine 02: Lighthouse]

ZOMG that took ages!!!

ok so i started playing this, like 1 oclock, and it is now nearly 10!!! talk about dedication!!!

the only part that realy stumped was what to do with the coils!!! I never found that extra part of it for that.

but if any one else is realy needing help completeing this, just give me a PM and i will be more then happy to help out, I just wish I managed to get all 20 secrets. any one knows what heppens if you do? I only got up to 17 , but i still think that wwas very good.

[Oddball Soccer]

me - 140 odd, them - 3

my god, cant u fix some of those bugs. and for the love of god, would it hurt to set them back to the center after a goal? this is way too glitched. htis should be blammed, im sorry, but it is just way to raw at the mooment.

[SP Survival Engine v0.0]

good game engine

if this truly is just a test of your game engine, then the looks are ok, but forthe real game, i hope you make it look a bit better.

from what i can see, he zombies spawn all over the map, wouldn't it be better if the only spawn close to where the person is, thus making the game a bit quicker. as for the controls, there a little counter intuative. I think the better way to control topdown shooters, is to aim using the mouse, then moing closer and futher away from the mouse using up and down or 'w' and 'd', then circling rond the mosue with left and right or 'a' and 'd'. But yer good damage system.

what about some more guns, and then using 'q' to go back through the list of guns. one thing though, hte pistol is ment to be half as strong as the ak-47, but i could never kill anything with the pistol, no matter how many times i hit it.

[Roto-Scoping Tutorial]

should be able to say somthing is a tutorial.

yer, there are a lot of tutorails, so why not be able to select from tutorial, game and movie.

any hoops, relay like that stlye of art, though it seems ot be very time consuming, would look great for a movie but again, the time factor. wold be great if some one showed how to do this fast. (my voeting here reflects the what he is teaching)